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Should I finish
No, I think it's aa waste.
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Sure, I would love to hear the ending.
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it's been 12 days since the last part, whats taking so long killingspree?
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Hurry up and make part 5 already.
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Sorry guys.
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Okay to make up for not making a new part for so long, I'm having 2 parts in one!

"Okay."I said as we walked back to the hotel. Andrew still looked puzzled, okay when we get back I'll explain everything. As we got back to the hotel I told andrew to sit down. "Okay, right now I am facing the battle of the so called elites, it is a battle where I have to save my loved ones from certin death by winning every challenge every week there is a different challenge from what I have noticed. They get harder each week, and more dangerous. I have won the privelge to use you in my battle, I don't know if this means your saved. All the guide said,"was I can use you you for my challenges, that was the reward for killing that red thing."Andrew now looked excited, "well that means it's time to go kick some alien butt! (I excpeted Andrew to act like that, Andrew was never the scared shy type.) All right then! Andrew said,"Hey doesn't the thing read the challenges? I repiled yes from a sheet, so what if we steal it? I don't know Andrew what if we get caught, we might both be killed. And if we don't, we can train for every single challenge. Andrew I do think this is going to far, lets just try. Today at midnight,
fine Andrew this better be worth it. "It will James it will." As the clock struck 12 we silently snuck up ito the grand hall, there I saw the sheet on a desk next to the sleeping figure. Okay we'll sneak up from behind, andrew wishpered.
I tiptoed behind the figure, and as soon as I touched it. A spirit came out, and shouted for us to leave, But you don't understand whencI say shouted, I thought my eardrums were about to explode. Strangly the figure hadn't awaken, Andrew said as we ran away,hey he must be a tight sleeper. Whew that was close Andrew you almost got us killed. Andrew blushed... fine I won't do anything dumb again. The next week came as the figure announced the next challenge, the figure had said," A very simple task all you do is, get letters. I thought theres some strings to it isn't there, why yes the figure said, you have to collect all 50 in the lava chamber. As lava will rise, faster and faster by each 5 minutes. This is a challenge where you will have to use your partner. Andrew Screamed YES! Other stared,"gosh Andrew your embarassing!" You may go to the count of 3. 1... 2... 3! I ran quickly already 10 letters caught my attention, I grabbed them uh oh! Andrew run the lava was flowing up, oh #### it burned off my shoe. It ran quickly up the stairs. I saw 10 more, Andrew looks like there is 10 on each level I know, I managed to scoop up only 1 I thought it was over. Then Andrew came running with the other 9 oh thanks man! You rule! I know andrew said. Hurry! The lava was flowing, each floor was a diffrenet envirment. The 3rd was a black burned down plain, I saw 10 letters again, I scooped one up and 5 more, Andrew had the other 4. I got it I got it! Andrew screamed. Then as I thought he DRoPPED A LETTER. Into the lava, Andrew you just screwed us! Run! The lava was flowing up, I ran to the 4th floor, I couldnt see any leters in the dense fog on floor 4 I felt around. I got one letter, one more, I got 7 now. Andrew has the other 3. We ran up to floor 5 when I slipped, Then Andrew grabbed my hand and pulled me up, Thanks man! Welcome, the next floor was green, and with black floors, Andrew stepped on a tiles, it shifted out oh crud...




PART 6: Just to our liking about 1,000 knives shot out from top bottom and both sides, I managed to pick up the tile and dodge a few, but Andrew wasn't so lucky, he was bleeding with many knives sticking out of him, he coughed out blood. I had no time to collect more I just ran out carrying Andrew. The figure asked me how much letters I got I ansrewed, 44. Heh I see your friend stepped on the trap, the figure laughed. I would get those knives out before he bleeds to death. As he walked away, oh and don't forget which person to kill by tommrow. It was midnight Andrew was awakened from his short coma, he woke up startled what happened? he said. Well, you got stabbed alot...
He tried to get up, AH! He screamed as he fell down. You won't be able to walk for atleast 2 weeks. What?! who will help you out the, you would have killed yourslef in the next challenged if it weren't for me! I'll handle myslef, your in no condition to be even walking. Andrew sighed,"I'm worried about you man." Don't I said, I'll handle it, promise. The next day, the figure came into out room, he laughed with that cruel laugh. Heh your lucky your friend didn't die here. He threw us a ball, what is this? A ball, we don't need this. Look into it, It says global corner. So what does it do, hats for you to figure out.
I really wanted to take the knives I pulled out of andrew and shove them down his throat, but I used my common sense before I did that. So I didn't do it, rest Andrew and maybe you'll be in shape to walk next week. I'll go get some food. I noticed I hadn't eaten in 1 week, I got some food from the portal. Dang handy thing, it teleports the food you say, I said, Pizza, cola, chips, chicken wings. I waited for a while and I got the food. I went upstairs to get the food to Andrew but... he wasn't there!
PArt 7 coming soon. This time I really mean soon.
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Whoa so interesting, too bad he cant help james =(
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Tiny delay in the story, it seems what I wanted to write doesn't make much sense.
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Dude cmon write part 7
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But whos going to read it. O.o this place is dead.
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I'm gonna read it. It's a good story.
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WE READ IT, you know you could always SHOW people it too
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PLEASE I LOVE IT I'M YOU'RE BIGGEST FAN!!!
I need to know what happens to James and Andrew! It's so exciting!!

It should be published =D

please please please please please!!
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Fine, Fine.



I came up and Andrew wasn't there! I quickly ran looking and, he was trying to go down the stairs. I screamed at him " are you retarded!?" You can't walk yet, before I could grab him he fell. I caught him before he fell down even more, I placed him back in bed. Due to his body being to fragile at the moment, he was knocked out cold, I left a note by his desk and some food. While I went to see what the special ball can do, I tried saying"Global corner" nothing, I was frustrated and threw it down as hard as I could, the it lit up, and out came alot of smoke, choking toxic smoke, ah I see. The ball is used to stun a enemy in combat, well better see if Andrew is up. I went up to the room and he was eating his food quietly, he saw me walk in and said," thanks." I won't try that again, I said," It is alright." Just don't do it again. Ever. Okay we agreed, the next day was the challenge I couuldn't sleep what if it was a team challenge, I would surly die. I stood no chance, the next day was here and I was pumped and ready as I walked to the grand hall to wait for one more challenge, the figure came in and shouted out, okay be ready. This challenge will be as Americans call it DODGEBALL! I said phew, untill I looked at the steel and spiked balls, half of the group will be on one side as half the other, understand? I person raised his hand, the figure responded SILENCE FOOL, nobody asked you to talk, and the challenge began. I was picked for team broucsa. The other team was yghaca. Elimanation tourny, the balls were in the middle as the figure shouted 3 2 1! Go!, then everyone went after the ball, I waited in the back hoping our team would win without me, then suddenly a ball comes at me flaming fast, and narrowly kills me. Whew I took the stell ball, ugh" I can hardly hold this thing rather throw it, I waited in the bac praying it would be over, it wasn't, everyone in my team was out and I was up agaisnt a huge slug type creature. I looked over for a light ball and found one, oh thank god I threw it, it missed, by atleast 5 feet. Then I slug looked dead. I threw a light ball at it, and it was out. I guess that was a easy win, got out lucky. Now the figure anoucced everyone on the winning team. Gets to save one person. The choices have to be in by next week. I thought Andrew should be okay by then to help me, I knew just who to save, I wanted my sister to stay alive for some reason. Just this feeling in my gut to do it, so I did. The next day Andrew was able to walk on crutches. I made dinner again, called as you can say I guess. We ate I was thinking about my choice, I wondered about life without a sister. Then I just said,"Never mind to myslef." And knew I was going to save her, Me and andrew were playing checkers, he always got a enjoyment out of beating me in checkers he knew I stunk, I didn't mind. Andrew asked,"is something bothering you?" No I lied. I wondered if I was going to have the chance to live with most of the people I love and trust, this competion made me belive in things I never thought were true, only thing. Is if I can escape this while it's still okay... I wondered if Mom and Dad knew about this, because I would never be able to explain to them, they would think I am crazy. So I thought, How would I break it to them? Without them thinking I am some lunatic.
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NAO write part 8 >.<
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NICE but WRITE THE NEXT ONE!!!! This is like an addiction xD
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Keep it going. And save the sister.
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NICE but WRITE THE NEXT ONE!!!! This is like an addiction xD


Your SO RIGHT xD
CMON KILLINGSPREE WE KNOW YOU HAVE A LIFE BUT WE NEED THIS AGHHHHH
*IS GOING CRAZY* O.o lawl
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WRITE THE STORY, DANG IT!! Angry
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Oh he said he lost his password to this site gah
Off-topic: rofl I havent been here in so long and the christmas logo is still up
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